Critique Required Mount Assiniboine

[Keith Hedges]

 

[Pete Askew]

A bit I think. The mountain and its reflection work very well but the foreground, at the moment, makes the overall scene a bit too complex I think. Maybe pushing the contrast higher and making the whole scene more abstract might help with all the elements in. What do you think?

 

[Tom Dunne]

Maybe a little bit but I think the main problem is that what's there is too squashed by the vertical format; the picture needs far more width. It's all a bit too much in the face. I would like to see it all moved back into the distance.

 

[Davie Hudson]

a little, I think i'd crop it and either take out the rock in the water or the top mountains as the reflection seems sharper

 

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

There is nothing wrong with the picture as it is, except it shows on my computer as too large. Scale it down and people shall see it differently I think. I copied it and looked at it as smaller and it looks very good to me. Well done

 

[Beth Carter]

b&w works well for this. the foreground looks good, but the mountains definitely need more room at the top, esp. on the right.

 

[Aldous Lau]

I'm with Beth