Critique Welcomed Pseudo Fashion Streaky

[Peter Blake]

more like an out of body experience. in a way it was. she's the teenage older sister of one my kids' school friends. she had never modelled before, but she was actually pretty good at it.

 

[Chris Dodkin]

I like the effect a lot - movement in a still frame

 

[Rob MacKillop]

Oh, that's really good. Works well. More in a similar vein, please!

 

[Pete Askew]

I like this very much also Peter. And I can only echo Rob's plea!

 

[Paul Lange]

Good that is Peter, I like it too.

 

[Julian de'Courcy]

Peter superb. it has a passing by or departing feeling for me, the double and the panning, great execution, along with the softness for her and the processing works a treat.

 

[Nathan Wright]

I love the framing and the face taking up the top, especially the staring directly into the camera. My wife took one that serves similar artistic points. Both feature a young person who transcends the frame. I love that. The movement bit is a bit Matrix. I'm not a people photographer so I can't give anything really helpful.