Critique Welcomed Russian Model Dasha first couple of edits

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Model portfolio build for a local model came out pretty well not much editing needed either which is a god send me think but critique welcomed ;)
 

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Yeah see where you are coming from, hair would have been better being the ear. I have got plenty of shots but only three with this pose but none with the head back. Got about twelve edits to do so will post some more got a range of clothes shots, but these are the photos she picked to buy .
 
Be interested to see the rest ... I quite like the cool effect, is it done with white balance? You might want to try doing it with a tone (split tone in LR) on the highlights ... I'm not sure it would work any better but it might by worth a crack

The pose in the second doesn't bother me as much but I will bow to Aleks' knowledge on this one as this is his field, I think he is right about the hair over the eye.

The first I think works, but I think there is maybe room for a bit more space around her, just slightly tight on the crop!

Good stuff though and your making money out of it which is definitely a good sign!
 
Yeah hamish could of expanded the crop tbh using 50mm with my back flat to the wall to take these shots, I'm no small boy either. Lr temp altered then luminosity adjust on aqua and blues, slight exposure adjust then in PhotoShop thinned the legs and waist, high pass filter on dress. Didn't take long as the image was good. Oh also damped up clarity in Lr. Other images I got are secretary type look which I hate but heh Ho and similar to 1960 s look which I've used split toting on. Will post tonight. Got some images round my house so good to be out of the studio. In those shots she looks like the girl out of scooby doo with the red hair.
 
Adam, love the cheeky nature of #1 :D

Like the blue metallic look - very eye catching

did she bring her own clothing for the shoot or did you have to source some?
 
All the clothing was her own luckily well unless she bought it just for the shoot, I didn't check for tags , you never know she might of taken it back to the shops after.
 
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