Critique Welcomed Salesman

[Aldous Lau]

My first roll of 120 color @ 6x7

 

[Pete Askew]

Now that has come out well and I like the composition very much.

 

[Aldous Lau]

Now that has come out well and I like the composition very much.

Thank you Pete

 

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

Not at all bad for film Aldous, compositionwise it is very good.

 

[Aldous Lau]

Not at all bad for film Aldous, compositionwise it is very good.

Thanks Ivar