Critique Welcomed Sharing A Moment

[Brian Moore]

Another from my recent outing with the Brownie Hawkeye Flash Model with flipped lens. The nice thing about this camera is its big flat rectangular bottom,...which allows for it to be firmly planted upon a flat surface to steady it for long exposures. This was about a 3 second exposure. (Just guessing at that, since I didn't time it.)

Fuji Acros 100 processed in Rodinal.

 

[Paul Lange]

There is something elegant and enigmatic about this one. I can't explain why exactly but I think it is something to do with the poses of the people. There is just enough visible to make out what they are doing.

 

[Brian Moore]

There is something elegant and enigmatic about this one. I can't explain why exactly but I think it is something to do with the poses of the people. There is just enough visible to make out what they are doing.

Thank you, Paul. Much appreciated.

 

[Hamish Gill]

Yes, very nice ... The framing couldn't be better really!

 

[Brian Moore]

Yes, very nice ... The framing could be better really!

Thanks, but how do you mean about the framing, @Hamish Gill?

 

[Hamish Gill]

The framing of the subject, by the blur but also the layers of geometric shapes.
Compositionally, it works very well for me!

 

[Rob MacKillop]

I think Hamish meant "could't"...?

 

[Hamish Gill]

Yes ... Rob is right, I've corrected it

 

[Rob MacKillop]

LOL Makes a big dif!

 

[Hamish Gill]

Doesn't it ... Sorry for the misunderstanding @Brian Moore

 

[Brian Moore]

Doesn't it ... Sorry for the misunderstanding @Brian Moore

Nae bother, laddie! (I assumed that was the case--just wasn't sure.)

 

[Chris Dodkin]

Almost a T&S effect here Brian - the figures could be small scale models - very effective

 

[Brian Moore]

Almost a T&S effect here Brian - the figures could be small scale models - very effective

Thank you, Chris. Much appreciated.

 

[Julian de'Courcy]

Nice one Brian. What I fully connect with are the elements of focus and as Hamish says the composition of shapes and structures.

 

[Pete Askew]

I'm a bit late here but I can only echo what the others have already said. Superb. And just look at that lead line.

 

[Brian Moore]

I'm a bit late here but I can only echo what the others have already said. Superb. And just look at that lead line.

Sknaht Etep,...er, I mean, Thanks Pete!

 

[Pete Askew]

Emoclew er'uoy!