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[Stevenson Gawen]

I don't know what to call this one. It was a lucky shot... I was in my car and had pulled over, I think to make a phone call, and saw this scene in an adjacent shop window (bicycles I think) that seemed to be in the fitting out stage.

I feel like you could put so many interpretations to it.
Any ideas?

 

[Stevenson Gawen]

P.S. I can't decide whether the pillar or window frame obscuring the man on the left breaks the composition or not...

 

[Brian Moore]

For me the pillar is a distraction, Stevenson. Otherwise it's a very pleasing shot and the silhouette is just magical.

 

[Pete Askew]

It is, but on the other hand it makes the scene more enigmatic, and I think that is a strength.

 

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

I don't know what to call this one. It was a lucky shot... I was in my car and had pulled over, I think to make a phone call, and saw this scene in an adjacent shop window (bicycles I think) that seemed to be in the fitting out stage.

I feel like you could put so many interpretations to it.
Any ideas?

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Very well seen and quick action I suppose. Well done indeed.

 

[Stevenson Gawen]

Very well seen and quick action I suppose. Well done indeed.

Thanks! Yes, it was lucky timing...