Critique Welcomed A Woman on the Beach at Sunset

[Brian Moore]

Huntington Beach, California, a few years ago.

Olympus XA3 with Tri-X at 1600. Processed in Rodinal.

 

[Rob MacKillop]

Nice. Is she cradling the sun?

I like the special relationships between the different groups of people. It says something - I know not what - about life.

 

[Pete Askew]

That is an immensely satisfying composition, Brian. She anchors the whole perfectly.

And my, is that one bright phone screen!

 

[Brian Moore]

Nice. Is she cradling the sun?

I like the special relationships between the different groups of people. It says something - I know not what - about life.

I think Pete nailed it, Rob. She's cradling a cell phone with a powerfully-bright screen. Thanks Rob.

 

[Brian Moore]

That is an immensely satisfying composition, Brian. She anchors the whole perfectly.

And my, is that one bright phone screen!

Thanks a lot, Pete. And as I said to Rob I think you nailed it!