Critique Welcomed Burning Up

[Bobby Deal]

Giving a new definition to Fast Hands

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[Pete Askew]

Nice idea. He looks a tad uncomfortable in the first shot but the second works very well I think.

 

[Bobby Deal]

Nice idea. He looks a tad uncomfortable in the first shot but the second works very well I think.

Well as the flames are real his initial discomfort is understandable

 

[Pete Askew]

How long did it take to get rid of the smell after?

 

[Bobby Deal]

It was not bad at all. The only thing that was burning was a dab of rubber cement

 

[Hamish Gill]

THats really black smoke! Im not sure which I prefer really ... the pose id def better in the second but I like it all in focus I think!
THe contrast is a little "hard" looking ... If you follow? I guess it is intentional?

 

[Bobby Deal]

THats really black smoke! Im not sure which I prefer really ... the pose id def better in the second but I like it all in focus I think!
THe contrast is a little "hard" looking ... If you follow? I guess it is intentional?

Yea the rubber cement burns with a really dark smoke
The selective focus is intentional as is the hard contrast