Critique Welcomed Daffs

[Martin Carlin]

Well after yesterdays debacle with the Kentmere film I went out today again with the refurbished Pentax SP11. This time good old Delta 400 pro loaded.
Pentax SP11
1.8 50mm Carl Zeiss Jenna lens
Ilford Delta Pro 400
Processed Fotospeed FD10 Developer 6m:30sec Ilfostop and Ilford Rapid Fix.

 

[Pete Askew]

Now that is better and some lovely contrast - a feeingl of spring. I'd be tempted to lose a touch from the top, maybe to just above the bushes though to keep the focus on the flowers.

 

[Rob MacKillop]

Bonnie. It's heartening to see the gaffs coming out. Ours are lagging a bit behind, just stalks with no heads as yet.

 

[Julian de'Courcy]

Gorgeous Martin I can imagine having fun with this film.

 

[Martin Carlin]

Yep I Agree Pete about the crop this is out the scanner with just basic lightroom adjustments. was thinking of burning the highlight of the silver birch and adding a vignette.

Thank Julian and Rob

 

[Brian Moore]

I normally have difficulty appreciating images of flowers but this one's a stoater, Martin. Very nicely done, indeed.

 

[Martin Carlin]

I normally have difficulty appreciating images of flowers but this one's a stoater, Martin. Very nicely done, indeed.

Thanks Brian Im not usually one for taken them lol. But I'm confused with film B+W so not sure on what to shoot at the moment.

 

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

I think you did very well, but I have to agree with Pete here. Normally colours would have been my preference, but not here. Real good!