Critique Welcomed I see what you're doing..

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

Xt10 aperture 2 ISO 200 with 18mm

 

[John Allen]

I like the composition and the idea behind the shot. I'm not so sure about the distortion and the overexposed front of the passerby. Of course, it would be better in b&w. Just ask me or Rense, we'll tell you.

 

[Rense Haveman]

I like the composition and the idea behind the shot. I'm not so sure about the distortion and the overexposed front of the passerby. Of course, it would be better in b&w. Just ask me or Rense, we'll tell you.

Well, it's already almost monochrome, isn't it?

 

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

Thanks Rense I think John has a problem with his eyesight, or monitor.

 

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

I like the composition and the idea behind the shot. I'm not so sure about the distortion and the overexposed front of the passerby. Of course, it would be better in b&w. Just ask me or Rense, we'll tell you.

What distortion? We build buildings like that in Norway

 

[Pete Askew]

Nicely timed, Ivar.

 

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

Nicely timed, Ivar.

Triggered it by accident Pete