Critique Welcomed Imperial War Museum

Darren Turner

XProPhotographer
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I got all excited when i saw this shot :D;):o:) Love it

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@ Salford Quays Just Outside Manchester

Daz
 
that first one is top notch by any standards
 
Both great shots Dareen. But the first one is a "killer".

Pete
 
lovely lighting on #1 and a super refection

Not sure that the foreground isn't over complicating the image - sort of too much to take in before you settle on the subject?

If you do a pano crop and crop out that long low light source at the bottom of the image, it would take that point of focus away and help focus on the building I think
 
Yes I know what you mean Chris I took lots of shots from different views wasn't sure about the foreground but thought I would give it a try, does look a little complicated though I think
 
I can imagine that seeing these scenes for real were something to get excited about Darren. I like them both but I think the 2nd a little more than the 1st. I think any critique of mine will just be down to personal taste really. However, I would say that maybe you should clone out the white antenna on the top of the tower on the 1st. I find it a little distracting.
 
They're both lovely shots, Darren. Makes me want to go to the Museum.
 
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