Not sure that the foreground isn't over complicating the image - sort of too much to take in before you settle on the subject?
If you do a pano crop and crop out that long low light source at the bottom of the image, it would take that point of focus away and help focus on the building I think
Yes I know what you mean Chris I took lots of shots from different views wasn't sure about the foreground but thought I would give it a try, does look a little complicated though I think
I can imagine that seeing these scenes for real were something to get excited about Darren. I like them both but I think the 2nd a little more than the 1st. I think any critique of mine will just be down to personal taste really. However, I would say that maybe you should clone out the white antenna on the top of the tower on the 1st. I find it a little distracting.