Critique Welcomed Outdoor Bookstore

I'm liking the original square format Glenn, and I'm shocked that Pete is moving away from 1:1 - it's a first! :D

It gives the 'store' an feeling of open air space with the original comp I think - although that white door does draw the eye rather

I like the windows in the original comp - looking down on the books - it adds to the bizarre scene

Could you just adjust the door tone, and back it down a little to help it blend in rather than stand out?
 
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