Critique Welcomed Apartment Building

[Brian Moore]

On Emerald Street in Torrance California.

Minox 35GT and Kodak Tri-X processed in Rodinal.

 

[Glenn Clabo]

Nice symmetry Brian. You even got a little power pole in there!

 

[Julian de'Courcy]

as Glenn says great symmetry. i like the crop also the little slice of sky along with the texture of the concrete.

 

[Brian Moore]

Nice symmetry Brian. You even got a little power pole in there!

Thanks, Glenn. I was thinking about that power pole, too. Do you think I should remove it?

 

[Brian Moore]

as Glenn says great symmetry. i like the crop also the little slice of sky along with the texture of the concrete.

Thanks, Julian. Do you think I should remove the power pole?

 

[Glenn Clabo]

Thanks, Glenn. I was thinking about that power pole, too. Do you think I should remove it?

I would Brian...but it may upset Kev.

 

[Chris Dodkin]

Wow - looks more like a commercial building Brian - or something from Logan's Run!

 

[Brian Moore]

Wow - looks more like a commercial building Brian - or something from Logan's Run!

lol. A bit odd isn't it Chris?

 

[Pete Askew]

You can't go starting a new book until you've published the old one. That's just greedy!

Excellent start to the series Brian. And, what an entrance - love the symmetry.

 

[Brian Moore]

You can't go starting a new book until you've published the old one. That's just greedy!

Excellent start to the series Brian. And, what an entrance - love the symmetry.

lol. OK,...duly noted, Pete. Thanks.