Critique Welcomed Meg

[Brian Moore]

Santa Ynez, California.

Olympus OM2n. Tri-X. Rodinal developer.

 

[Rob MacKillop]

Really nice light on Meg’s face, and a good pose. I’m sorry to say that I find the background a little distracting. What do you think, Brian?

 

[Rob MacKillop]

PS The curve of the couch seems to be part of Meg as well. It’s beautiful.

 

[Pete Askew]

Wonderfully moody, Brian. The word, "pensive" springs to mind. The smooth tones are just gorgeous, but I agree with Rob about the distracting background. Maybe a a close crop of the top (maybe even taking the highlight on her hair with it) and from the left would help. What do you think?

 

[Brian Moore]

What do you think, Brian?

I don't disagree, Rob. Thanks for your comments.

Wonderfully moody, Brian. The word, "pensive" springs to mind. The smooth tones are just gorgeous, but I agree with Rob about the distracting background. Maybe a a close crop of the top (maybe even taking the highlight on her hair with it) and from the left would help. What do you think?

Thanks Pete. I don't disagree with you either. I may play around with it.

 

[Rob MacKillop]

How very modern of you, Brian. No one agrees anymore. They just don’t disagree. That says something. Not sure what.

 

[Pete Askew]

I don't not disagree with you there, Rob.

 

[Pete Askew]

I think!

 

[Rob MacKillop]

…therefore a yam.