Critique Required In Detroits

[Hamish Gill]

We have an American theme diner called detroits ... We went for Hannah and her sisters birthday.
Here is Connie exploring


In detroits by Hamish_Gill, on Flickr

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... love xp2! Such a wonderful tone I think!

 

[Pete Askew]

It is indeed and damn fine latitude. So Breakfast at Tiffany's and Lunch at Detroits, Eh?!

I like the fact that it appears empty except for Connie. And the glow on the floor is great. GR1 again?

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Actually, I answered that myself by following the link to the Flickr set on the GR1. Wonderful stuff Hamish - you've been holding out!

 

[Glenn Clabo]

Love the tone and feel. Small point...would have left out the left side wall jut out.

 

[Dan Cattermole]

Like that you can see the hive in the backround.
Nice one H, tonetastic!

 

[Brian Moore]

Hannah and her sisters

Was Woody Allan there?

Bonnie fotie, Hamish. I like the sheen on the flair.

Also, is that a train emerging (or receding) on the bridge?

 

[Hamish Gill]

It is indeed and damn fine latitude. So Breakfast at Tiffany's and Lunch at Detroits, Eh?!

I like the fact that it appears empty except for Connie. And the glow on the floor is great. GR1 again?

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Actually, I answered that myself by following the link to the Flickr set on the GR1. Wonderful stuff Hamish - you've been holding out!

it was empty, literally just the 5 of us... Makes letting Connie run arround a lot less stressful!
Yes GR1, and not holding out, just haven't posted them yet!

Love the tone and feel. Small point...would have left out the left side wall jut out.

Thanks Glenn, yeah, I wasn't sure if that bit of wall was a distraction... Overall though I liked the size of Connie in the frame so that won out. Cheers

Like that you can see the hive in the backround.
Nice one H, tonetastic!

connie is actually drawn to the place ...

Was Woody Allan there?

Bonnie fotie, Hamish. I like the sheen on the flair.

Also, is that a train emerging (or receding) on the bridge?

good spot! Yes it would be a train ... Coming from Malvern by the looks of it! I'd not seen that!!

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... Pete is obviously slipping!

 

[Julian de'Courcy]

Superb Hamish, the contrast is great.

 

[Hamish Gill]

Thanks Julian

 

[Chris Dodkin]

Very nice shot into the light Hamish - and post or exposure adjustment required, or did the camera nail it?

 

[Hamish Gill]

The camera nailed

 

[Paul Lange]

You're right wonderful tones!! Exposure is spot on IMHO.

Is that a scratch on the neg, there is a white bit on the back of the chair?

 

[Hamish Gill]

It's a little bit of dust or somthing ... I cloned it out on the version I now have as my computer desktop