Simple Life III

[Rense Haveman]

Trying to control light, and perfecting things. However, I am less satisfied than yesterday. Grapes are better for this kind of stuff than mandarins, at least with the light I had available...


Chandelier by Rense Haveman, on Flickr

 

[Rense Haveman]

Another try, with a simpler subject...


Apple Study by Rense Haveman, on Flickr

 

[Pete Askew]

I agree, the first didn't have the magic of the others. The single apple is definitely better. Maybe some shading to the right?

 

[Rense Haveman]

Thank you Pete. I redid the mandarins in PP and I think the result is much better now. Did not upload it yet, so I can't show. Later!

 

[Rense Haveman]

Jar and apple by Rense Haveman, on Flickr

 

[Rense Haveman]

And a B&W version of the last one, with a (too big?) frame...

J
ar and Apple B&W by Rense Haveman, on Flickr

 

[Pete Askew]

Now they work beautifully and the lighting is just right I think. The frame looks fine to me.

 

[Dave Farnes]

Looks very good to me.

 

[Beth Carter]

i love the single apple. beautiful light and color on that one. great tones too, almost some retro toning going on.