Critique Welcomed Sitting On The Dock

Bobby Deal

Well-Known Member
Some more shots from the recent Lake Las Vegas shoot. While it was anything but a Bluebird day the weather was wonderful even if a little grey.
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I like the comp in #1 the best - the way his hair/head forms another peak in the mountain range! ;)

I do think he looks more natural in that first shot as well - and the overcast conditions have provided a nice soft-box for you - great lifestyle look with the boats etc in the backdrop

I see fill flash being used? On camera, or do you take portable strobe with you?
 
Thanks for the comments guys
Yes there was a bit of fill from an on camera speed light. I normally prefer to carry a battery powered Monolight with soft box or beauty dish but this particular location requires I pay and pull a permit to put stands on the ground which is not an issue other than I did not have the lead time available for me to permit this session as the client wanted the shoot on short notice and as the property is a privately held resort the process is SLOW.

As for poses the subject is not really a model, he simply wanted photos for dating sites and as gifts to his mom and family. So I felt he managed to do a pretty good job of staying relaxed and following direction in a situation where the truth is the poses are typically physically awkward and uncomfortable. Add in the public venue and I felt he did good enough I forwarded his photos on to a friend of mine at a local agency and they will be picking him up and adding him to their roster of aging baby boomer males which is actually a pretty good demographic for a male model to be in today.

Given some practice, instruction and experience I think he will do quite well as a model but at the time these were taken he was just an average Joe.

I could clone the small highlight off the tip of the nose though. I doubt I will revisit the images, it is minimal enoug that I dont see me worrying about it
 
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