Critique Required Needs Something Else

[Peter Blake]

but I can't think what. small parachutists photographed from below? in a multitude of colours? lemmings perhaps? diving ground ward.

the cloud needs to be moved? definitely a background for something, even if it's not much of a shot in its own right

 

[Brian Moore]

What about an airplane?

 

[Peter Blake]

maybe. given the surreal nature of the image, I naturally though of something equally surreal in the sky. might be a something for Alamy or similar

 

[Brian Moore]

"Alamy...." Sorry Peter I don't know what that is.

As for the airplane, Darren Bradley posted an image some time ago and the perspective was looking up beyond the facade of the building to the sky--not dissimilar to your perspective in this picture you've posted--and he had captured a jet liner in it. It looked smashing to me. That's where the thought came from I think. (A contrail might be a nice touch if you do add a plane.)

 

[Rob MacKillop]

Spiderman!

 

[Julian de'Courcy]

I'm with Rob, first thought, Spiderman. Plus size, be nice to view this type of pic larger. Love the dramatic tones of the sky.

 

[Beth Carter]

a burning astronaut. definitely needs a burning space man. cool tones.

 

[Pete Askew]

How about a simple 90º rotation?