Critique Required So It's Nearly Valentine's Day Again But

[Peter Blake]

I thought about it and decided to illustrate the flip side. there are a lot of lonely people! especially relevant I feel in big cities



on reflection the whiteboard was perhaps a little heavy handed, or maybe we could have used a black board for this shot. model does describe herself as a little bit emo

 

[Pete Askew]

Nicely done though Peter.

 

[Rob MacKillop]

Thanks for reminding me!!! Got to go....

PS Good shot, but you know the sign hasn't worked as well as it could have. Is there anything you can do to bring it out more?

 

[Glenn Clabo]

Really like this idea Peter. I agree with you that the board is a little off putting...but the subject is well done.

 

[Peter McCullough]

Nice capture Peter. I like the out of focus motorcycle in the background, that's my gig.

 

[Peter Blake]

she does describe herself also as a motorcycle widow!

 

[Peter Blake]

and here are a couple from the previous shoot along the same lines (different model). again, critique required

 

[Pete Askew]

I like these even more Peter. I think that as part of a series with several models the sign works. Even so I like these more as the model is in more obvious surroundings than the first one, especially 2182.

 

[Peter Blake]

I lik these even more Peter. I think that as part of a series with several models the sign works. Even so I like these more as the model is in more obvious surroundings than the first one, especially 2182.

I was musing along these lines (the series) too. men are hard to recruit….maybe I'll put it out among the acting community