Critique Welcomed The Old Man And The Sea

[Brian Moore]

Le Racou beach, Argeles-sur-Mer, France.

Olympus XA2 with Retrochrome 320 slide film cross-processed in C41 developer.

 

[Rob MacKillop]

The Chief of the Horizon Police will have no complaint here, Brian.

I must say, he does look relaxed, especially for someone who has lost his boat. Did you kick him out of it?

I love the rendering of the water. A satisfying picture of a happy moment.

 

[Pete Askew]

A super shot, Brian and I even like the vertical line!

Love the colours, the grain and the rendering that Rob refers to. I also like the floats / heads further out.

 

[Brian Moore]

I even like the vertical line!

Uh-oh,...are you head of the Vertical Police too?

Thanks Pete.

 

[Brian Moore]

The Chief of the Horizon Police will have no complaint here, Brian.

I must say, he does look relaxed, especially for someone who has lost his boat. Did you kick him out of it?

I love the rendering of the water. A satisfying picture of a happy moment.

Careful, Rob: We need to look out for the vertical lines now, too!

I didn't just kick him out; I made him walk the plank!

Thanks Rob!

 

[Rob MacKillop]